Monday, March 11, 2013

My Done and Edited version of my Writing Sample.

“It’s a weird day today” said Dad. “Things are going missing”. “The Important things” he said. “You are right” said Jaden, “My PSP has vanished”.

Today Jaden and Justine were throwing things out, WITHOUT THEIR PARENT'S PERMISSION. They threw out things like Phones, Dad’s old Guitar, And photos of Dad and Mum in their young days.

So they all started blaming each other. Jaden and Justine were blaming Mum and Dad. And Mum and Dad were blaming Jaden and Justine. So little by little more things went missing such as Bobby John’s toys and his pram.

Then all of a sudden they had noticed that Bobby John had mysteriously disappeared! They looked everywhere but no sign of Bobby John anywhere. Do you know where he is?

After a while Jaden and Justine went looking into Bobby John’s Room, and they saw him sleeping in his bed. Then JAde and Justine thought

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