From day one,
without knowing it,
I loved you with all my heart.
As I grew older I looked up to you and to no other.
Yes, we fought many of times but you supported,
and encouraged me in everything I did.
You were my best friend and my hero.
At night I miss the sound of your music,
I miss you climbing through the window when you were late.
I miss your comfort and the way you made me feel safe.
I miss our nonsense arguments and all our wrestling matches just to pass time.
I like to remember our times together good times and the bad.
I regret the times I yelled at you when you were only trying to help,
but you know I only did it because you did it to me.
I wanted to do everything you did,
because I wanted to JUST like you!
I miss your smile,
and I miss the way our room smelt of your cologne.
But most of all I miss your reassuring hugs and playful kisses.
I wish I could go back and tell you how I felt,
tell you that I really need you no matter what I said.
I kept your favorite sweater and wear it every time I miss you
like I did when I was little.
I will always love you no matter how long its been,
since the day your life came to an end.
I miss my big brother.
Rest In Peace Daniela Inoke Pepa.
You will always be remembered by lots.
Hi Lesieli,
ReplyDeleteLove your poem about your brother. It is lovely and you have put your honest opinion. I feel sorry for you Lesieli because your brother. I like the pictures of him. You have regretted what you loved doing with him! If my little 3 year old brother passed away the same way as your brother passed away, I would write a beautiful poem like this on you wrote. I like how you put sun rise and sun set, it is what most people do when someone in there family passes away! Sorry for your lost by the way. I reckon if you saw your brother that was going to pass, I reckon you will help him and if you still saw him and he still had like about 20% in him you will tell him your feelings. I am happy and sad. The reason why I am happy is because you wrote this poem/post about your brother. I am sad because your brother. I like the way you wrote it because it has detail about your brother and also your real words about your lovely brother. We are a family as well so it makes me want to cry because it is my brother as well. By the way Lesieli is he in tonga? And are you going to tonga only if he is in there! REST IN PEACE DANIEL INOKE PEPA!!! :( <3 :'(
Iron
Hi Lesieli,
ReplyDeleteI really love your poem. It is really sad that you lost your own brother. That is very good poem this is this is reminding me of the lost of the people that have past away. I really like reading this From day one,
without knowing it,
I loved you with all my heart.
As I grew older I looked up to you and to no other.
Yes, we fought many of times but you supported,
and encouraged me in everything I did.
You were my best friend and my hero.
At night I miss the sound of your music,
I miss you climbing through the window when you were late.
I miss your comfort and the way you made me feel safe.
I miss our nonsense arguments and all our wrestling matches just to pass time.
I like to remember our times together good times and the bad.
I regret the times I yelled at you when you were only trying to help,
but you know I only did it because you did it to me.
I wanted to do everything you did,
because I wanted to JUST like you!
I miss your smile,
and I miss the way our room smelt of your cologne.
But most of all I miss your reassuring hugs and playful kisses.
I wish I could go back and tell you how I felt,
tell you that I really need you no matter what I said.
I kept your favorite sweater and wear it every time I miss you
like I did when I was little.
I will always love you no matter how long its been,
since the day your life came to an end.
I miss my big brother.
Rest In Peace Daniela Inoke Pepa.
You will always be remembered by lots. We would always remember your family and the lost of your brother. Rest in Peas Daniela Inoke Pepa <3
your sincerely
Sela
Really sad to hear,
ReplyDeleteNot to fear , your brother will always be there! I love about what you wrote about your sibling hood with your brother Inoke. I hope your still happy:)
R.I.P Inoke Pepa
Hi Lesieli,
ReplyDeleteI am so sorry to hear about your brother I really know how much you loved him and how much you miss him. But remember he is always there beside you. R.I.P. Inoke Pepa :(
Quasia
Sorry For Your Lost,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job explaining your brothers personality. I really loved your poem and I also admire it. Keep up the awesome and amazing poems.
Hello My Dear Friends,
ReplyDeleteThanks for all the Lovely comments I really like reading it, You made me Happy as I was reading along. I love the words that You used Iron and Josephine and the Others two.
I can't wait to thank you guys at school tomorrow.