Thursday, February 21, 2013

What Is Oxygen Weed?

Oxygen Weed is Dark green it has little inedible fruits. It lives in the water, and it’s stalks sometimes submerges out onto the lake. It looks like a floating jellyfish but it’s actually floating on it surface.

At times it clinging to the edge of the lake. And did I mention that it is very long the stalk stays in the water and the face stays outside.



  1. Hi Lesieli
    What a very nice short story of Oxygen Weed. By the way here is a question what is a inedible? Also here is some advice, sometimes sentences don't really always start with "And". By the way like the picture but I reckon it would of been better if you drew it.

  2. Awesome story Lesieli,
    I really enjoyed it and by the end, I knew exactly what you were talking about. Next time, make sure that you read it again before you post it because some parts need a bit of proof reading. Other than that, it was really good. Keep up the great work:-)