Saturday, October 6, 2012

( My Narrative Writing ) Trouble in the great Marathon

On a gougers fall morning Summer boarded tickets heading sight for Auckland city. She was really excited, she was making a visit to her old school to sign up for the great Marathon. Her hair tingled as she walked up to the school.

" Well Well " said Mr Burt, " What are you doing here ". " I heard about the Great Marathon and I decided to sign up ". But as I got ready I saw my Enemies oh no things a going to get really dirty.

Tune in Next week to see what Happens next...

1 comment:

  1. A great 'hook' for your narrative Lesieli! I can't wait to read the rest :)