On a gougers fall morning Summer boarded tickets heading sight for Auckland city. She was really excited, she was making a visit to her old school to sign up for the great Marathon. Her hair tingled as she walked up to the school.
" Well Well " said Mr Burt, " What are you doing here ". " I heard about the Great Marathon and I decided to sign up ". But as I got ready I saw my Enemies oh no things a going to get really dirty.
Tune in Next week to see what Happens next...
A great 'hook' for your narrative Lesieli! I can't wait to read the rest :)
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