Thursday, April 3, 2014

Show Not Tell Setting.

Mary kicked her blanket off sweat came rolling down her face. “Argh it’s so hot!” she yelled. She looked to the left and thru the curtain was a moon beam. She slowly stood up, still thinking to herself  she was still asleep, or was she awake.
She climbed down the stairs and there it was a freezer. Her little feet made happy feet slaps and ran towards the freezer. “Ahh, nice cold air.” she said.  She climbed back up the stairs and all she  could hear was crickets it was 4:25 and now she was really tired now it time to sleep goodnight!

1 comment:

  1. Hi Lesieli, great descriptive writing. It has been soooooo hot at night lately when I go to bed I would love a freezer to blow cold air on me. Awesome photo by the way :)