My Done and Edited version of my Writing Sample.

“It’s a weird day today” said Dad. “Things are going missing”. “The Important things” he said. “You are right” said Jaden, “My PSP has vanished”.

Today Jaden and Justine were throwing things out, WITHOUT THEIR PARENT'S PERMISSION. They threw out things like Phones, Dad’s old Guitar, And photos of Dad and Mum in their young days.

So they all started blaming each other. Jaden and Justine were blaming Mum and Dad. And Mum and Dad were blaming Jaden and Justine. So little by little more things went missing such as Bobby John’s toys and his pram.

Then all of a sudden they had noticed that Bobby John had mysteriously disappeared! They looked everywhere but no sign of Bobby John anywhere. Do you know where he is?

After a while Jaden and Justine went looking into Bobby John’s Room, and they saw him sleeping in his bed. Then JAde and Justine thought

Side Profile.

This term the year Five's and Six's have been learning about Side Profiles. We learnt a lot about the ways it had to be drawn like, then it was time to make our move. At first we went to the ICT room and kick started the day with Drawing.

On the computer's we had to take a Picture on Photo Booth of yourself, But we had to be facing side wards, then we had to put it into our Hypo-studio Stack. We had the chance to create an Animation showing our self's walking thought Omaru Creek.

In the beginning I was a bit confused and didn't know what to do. So Mrs Telea said that the photo will be really useful, and it was. After drawing my charter I had the challenge to create a Fascinating background.

Check my blog Next Week to see how my background turned out!

Testing week!

In the past few week me and my group have been busy doing test's. I did three test's which was Reading, Writing and Math's. Before that, I was really nervous and exited at the same time. We did all our tests online on a site called E-Asttle, but sadly we had to do our writing sample on Google Doc.

Our first test was Reading, I did my reading test in the music room. As we entered the room we went straight to silent mode. Then we made a move as we were told to move to an computer. The test was great and I will be happy with my scores. But, the only thing that I didn't like about it was that we were put into the hot room.

Our writing test was up next. I did that in my class on my Netbook. The whole class had to write a narrative about things disappearing. First we had to Introduce the characters in the first Paragraphs. Then we had to talk about what the problem was in the next peace of writing. I wrote about things disappearing but on purpose.

The third and final one we did was the maths test. I did that test on one of the computers in the Music room.  I didn't really understand the math's test and I think that guest most of them. But I will still be happy with my score.

Week 5 Maths.

This week I have been learning about Equal Edition. Equal Edition is a strategy that is only used for Subtracting and Using numbers that is close to a hundred. It also means that it would not work for Pluses at all. 

All that you have to do is add to make a hundred. Once you have done that then I'm sure it would be easy to solve. And now I think that my whole group will enjoy learning this strategy.

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My Teacher

Mr s is good looking he looks sporty and he is. He is tall and has the skin colour of cream and has Black hair which is curly. He has one son and he is so cute.

Mr s is Personality is making people laugh. He loves to make people laugh, sometimes when he growls somebody he makes it funny so that the person doesn't cry.

Some of Mr S is hobbies are playing sports and chilling out with his class children, sometimes we even play outside just like yesterday we played T Ball.

Mr S is the best Teacher ever, He makes us Laugh and He 
comes up with best words ever like YOU DA WOMAN, but sometimes he can be really growl y!

The thing that I like about Mr Somerville is that he let’s us do anything such as Making Movies, Chilling Out and being normal. But

Sometime before Lunch time I love to hang around with my Teacher, But since I am an Ambassador he does not allow me to do those things any more.

Pohutakawa Tree

Pohutakawa Tree By Lesieli And Josephine. from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.


This movie is based on the Pohutakawa tree and what the tree features. We have worked really hard on this movie and we hope you enjoy it.

Things Gone Missing!

This is My Writing Sample that I managed to do In 40 Minutes. Tune in Next week to see what my edited version will look like. 

Start Writing Here :
“It’s a weird day today” said Dad “Things a gone missing” “The Important things” he said “You are right” said Jaden “My Psp has gone missing”. Today Jaden and Justine were throwing things out, WITHOUT THEIR PARENT'S PERMISSION. They threw out things like Phones, Dad’s old Guitar, And photos of Dad and Mum in their young days.

So they all started blaming each other. Jaden and Justine were blaming Mum and Dad. And Mum and Dad were blaming Jaden and Justine. So little by little more things went missing such as Bobby John’s Toys. Then all of a sudden they had noticed that Bobby John had Mysteriously gone! They looked everywhere but no sign of Bobby John anywhere.

After a while Jaden and Justine went looking into Bobby John’s Room and they saw him sleeping in his bed. “You two still have some explaining to do” said Mum and Dad.